Ad I made

[Knux68]

Mods, let me know if there is a problem posting this graphic. I do not meen to get any free publicity from this, but rather a critiqueing of the ad itself. If I have to I will remove the web address from the Ad.

I randomly made this ad after taking some pictures (on the only mildly warm day in winter) of my friend and team rider Nick. I don't plan to use it or anything besides like myspace, but I thought it would look cool in my portfolio.

I just would like to know what you think about it, and if its possibly ad worthy.

http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/2769/nickadjpegmyspace6rz.jpg

[skaterat]

Dude that's sick, nice job!!!

[mcwattersm]

Thats awesome shit.

[JoeyKovacs]

Man, that looks just like a page from a magazine. Great Job.

[SkaterBrett]

nice pic knux.You should send that to transworld.

[SkaterChet]

Are you sponsered by split skateboard cause if you are you can give it to a magazine

[360degrees]

skaterbrett AND skaterchet??? wow

anyway thats awesome Knux

[kcirtap]

thats awesome, it looks like an ad straight from a mag

[Ramprage]

knux68 - you've definately got some skill and eye for design. you're making your company look like one of the big boys, great work my friend.

Yeah its fine to have it posted here for review, I know you're just getting started.

Have you ever done website design before?

[Knux68]

Thanks alot everyone, I'm gonna keep tryin to work on things like this until I might one day actually make an ad for a big company or something.

I've done site design in the past, but nothing really recent. I'm not too bad in flash, but i've completely forgot alot of the html I used to do, and almost all of dreamweaver. I'd like to get back into it and I probably will this semster with a refresher class, but Photoshop is where I live most of the time.

[fallensk8er345]

wow man sick...that nice

[GrizzledJASPER]

Very nice design man. Clean and professional. I like it a lot.

[lost_and_found]

That really looks amazing you make more.

[Skate or Try]

looking good but doesn't have that legit look to it yet.

to clarify things
- you can't just send an ad into a skate mag, you have to pay, and a lot at that
- ads are normally made by the photographer, so if you want to start making proper ads then you need to step up the photog a bit

[Sam Gates]

Ha you showed me this. im diggin it again.

[Ramp]