almost got jacked

[Kick_Push_Coast]

my ipod and money was about to get jacked.

[sean a]

my ipod and money was about to get jacked.

Sweet story. I really like how you used so many descriptive adjectives to tell us what happened.

[skaterat]

I just love a Happy Ending.

[bob jenkins]

please, next time don't be so descriptive

[Real_O.G.]

No way! Your ipod and money almost got jacked.


Maybe you could make a sequel to this...with a little bit more information.

[smurf88]

Too long didn't read.

[JoeyKovacs]

well GUYS, he didn't write a huge story, he was too busy Defending his precious belongings from the Description Goblins.

[skaterat]

Episode One: My ipod and money was about to get jacked.

The Sequel: But then they didn't.

[dantheman15]

hahaha nice story it was very riviting and action packed i liked it

[snow_skate]

hes just a attention wanter

[dantheman15]

yea he just wrote this to get a big thread do lets not talk on it
any more

[Zer0 Her0]

Stupid thread.
Wrong section.

And boring.

[dantheman15]

amen lets not post it any more

[just skate dude]

wow....... interesting that was really long......................

[AlmostJeff]

Damn dude my eyes are bugging out from reading so much man. Next time be a little more considerate and take mercy on my poor poor eyes.

[StevoElSupremo]

u sure showed to writers of the LOTR and Star wars movies whos boss

[Sk8 Shorty's]

and how did they almost get "jacked"?

[dantheman15]

ah the question of the centery

[skateblank714]

for such a short story im surprised it got 17, now 18 replies to it, good job if thats what you where trying to accomplish

[dantheman15]

u think thats a lot go look at Rodney mullen is an aliean
i wrot it and i think it has 112 post

[Kick_Push_Coast]

i was at school walkin with my friend kevin. i was rockin sb's and was listening to my ipod. this was after school by the way after the hip hop club. i was walkin and we saw this group of black people that were at least twice my size. gangsters. im a sophmore and they looked like seniors. we were about 30 yards away from them. all of a sudden two of them came up behind us and one guy said "aye yo wassup cuz i heard u were messin with my lil brother?" i said nope. then he said "oooh im about to beat yo ass blood empty out yo pockets." he pulled out a shank. i dont know how he managed to get a knife into the school because we have metal detectors. but it was real. not fake plastic. then two other of their friends came and held my backpack so i wouldnt get away. i emptied my pockets and gave them my stuff. my friend also had to give up the spoils. the guy behind me elbowed me in the back of the head and started cussing at me. then a fukkin cop and a cst walked by and saw what happened. it was pretty dark so they couldnt really recognize them. so much shit happens at this school that they have cops and cst's patrol the school. for once im actually thankful for the cops because usually they are against taggers and skaters. im not a punk im, im not willing to jus hand over my stuff without a fight. but these foos would overpower us easily and they had more in quantity.

[SlimJim_junky]

Now, that's a story!

[dantheman15]

yes much better but now i realy dont want to read it all
but it is much better than the first
bennut putter jelly time

[Kake Jelly]

my ipod screen broke so i squized it and all this blue shit came out

[goofy m3ng]

I updated my ipod and i need a wall charger to listen to it agen :(

[emericask8ter]

Nice story. Our school has a couple of kids like that.

[fanheader]

ours dosent....the worst that happened is another school mobbed us and the teachers made us stay in for ages...grr

[skater_penguin]

another "school" mobed you!?!? dude that weird..........

[bmmetcalf]

Wow luckily that wasnt me bc I dont like it when people jack shit from me. I would probaly of got my ass beat really bad. Atleast I would put of a fight. Your smart though. You did good not fightin back like me.

[Ramp]