A draft of my Part

[AdioBird52]

This is only a draft, seeing as it has no grinds, and is sketchy as hell.


These were all the first landing on film, they will be cleaner in a week or so.

Da shit (http://media.putfile.com/My-Skateboard-Part-draft)

Da shit with different music (http://media.putfile.com/My-Video-Draft-different-music)

[STR8 RIPPIN']

Trim the song next time and dont use that song next time. I liked the cab you did a full 360 without pivoting where as most people 180 the pivot the last 180.

[chocolak]

that was cool too many off the same tricks and way to skecthy but i understand there like first try er somthing

[Forum Junkie]

Omg that song is from tony hawks pro skater 3 am I right? Its cool I enjoyed it. Yeah trim the music.

[AdioBird52]

In the final, it will be trimmed. This is not edited much, but it will be.

Trim the song next time and dont use that song next time. I liked the cab you did a full 360 without pivoting where as most people 180 the pivot the last 180.

i'm using Fuel (Metallica) now. http://media.putfile.com/My-Video-Draft-different-music

If a mod could add that to the original post, I'd appreciate it.

[Miniflipkid]

eeeeewwwwwwww

little kid style

eeeeeewwwwwwwww

flatground

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curb tricks

eeeeeeeeewwwwwwww

bad song







eeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww

[crazy_dave]

^tis not a bad song.

I used that for one of my first ever sections, if you have the right footage it goes great.

You got a lot of good tricks and your pretty consistant. But your skating your drive-way which is quite frankly boring. take all that to some sets and ledges and you'll have a great section.

[skizzate]

Yeah the driveway/street got pretty old. Good skating, bad camera angles, and bad camera man.

[AdioBird52]

Yeah the driveway/street got pretty old. Good skating, bad camera angles, and bad camera man.

Yeah, we're doing our best to hit some sets. We will probably have a 3 and 4 set in there eventually. And a ledge.
The camera is pretty bad. It's not ours, it's one of my friends dad's. He won't let us take it to spots.

And Miniflipkid, whats wrong with the flatground? I know my style isn't great. Any tips on improving that would be cool.

[juggle]

Flatground is for practice, i know your better than me and your about 4 feet tall its just not good seeing all of that suburbia skating.

[AdioBird52]

I don't choose where I live.

[Miniflipkid]

if you have the right footage it goes great.

exactly my point.

AdioBird, i know it isn't easy to find or go to spots, but there are always spots, and you should always shred them

[AdioBird52]

We skate spots sometimes, but we aren't allowed to bring the camera.

[chocolak]

no but seriusly bend your knees and get some steez dog u know what im sayin?

[AdioBird52]

And use punctuation dogg, you know what i'm sayin'?

Tee-hee

[FireFreek]

I don't want to sound like a hata but.

horrible filming.

horrible editing.

horrible music on both.

good skating but the driveway skating killed it. I mean, drive way skating isnt all bad, but a whole video part of flat land is.

[AdioBird52]

Yeah, the filming was shit. Thank my friends for that.

This was the first time I've ever edited anything, and we were using iMovie. It's shit. All that you can add are effects.

Whats wrong with Metallica?



Sorry about the flatland. Once we get our own camera, we'll be able to get some stair/ledge skating in the video. A camera just isn't in my budget, but I'm trying to save enough money.

[Ramp]