sponsor me video beginning

[kcirtap]

some of you may have been around when i made my first pitiful attempt at a "sponsor me" video, heres my second
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sp_OcoUzJRU
comments/criticism welcome!

[McJesus]

360 was rad

[NoneMoreBlack]

pretty good. Loved the crook 180. I suggest taking out the varial heelflip and hardflip becasue even though they were good tricks, they were extremely sloppy. My two cents.

[Priority]

terrible style, everything was sketchy, bad filming, and bad edit

[SteenBlakai]

That was pretty good yo.
The tricks were pretty good, but not enough i think.
And u need better style and get things cleaner.
If u cleaned it up and did some street and get alot more footy than it would be a good vid.

[McJesus]

Dude you style is fine

[kcirtap]

terrible style, everything was sketchy, bad filming, and bad edit
aww thanks bro youre sucha sweety, when i said criticism welcome, i didnt say "be a total dick" i know im not the greatest skater, but you made it seem like i was somewhat like this: http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=2154393751875655753&q=sponsor+me&hl=en

and for the nice people, yeah, ill probably get the varial heel and hardflp down a different gap, that was at this skatepark i dont go to much and my filmer had to leave soon so i just thought "what the hell?" and used em

thanks for the words, although the rest of the footy wont be here for a while because it just snowed : (

[sk8erdude333]

That was pretty good. I liked the nose grinds.

[NoneMoreBlack]

terrible style, everything was sketchy, bad filming, and bad edit

Dude post your own shit if youre gonna be that critical you giant douche.

[swayze]

terrible style, everything was sketchy, bad filming, and bad edit
hey man guess what!!

http://www.dreamviews.com/forum/style_emoticons/default/thefinger.gif

[skizzate]

Wasn't bad. Some sketch, some pretty sweet things. Can't wait to see the finished product.

[Dookie416]

hey man guess what!!

http://www.dreamviews.com/forum/style_emoticons/default/thefinger.gif


that's the spirit!

[scarecrow476]

Yea some stuff a little sketch. I've seen your other vids so I know your good but you just need to show the sponsors that in your video. I loved the filming on the last trick on the kicker type thing at the park btw.

[Kam1kaze]

Not bad, make sure everythings clean. Also do alot more street instead of park like stairs, handrails, gaps.

[frinklinduds]

cool video man keep it up, also cant wait to see the rest

[Miniflipkid]

Seriously, this website is so soft on everyone.

kc:tricks were alright, but they were executed ridiculously bad.

Now for those at home who already are offended, I am not hating on him, I am simply telling him that he needs to do the tricks better.

You probably won't find anywhere that will sponsor you, unless you have a shop with ridiculously low standards. Keep trying and you'll get there. But that all looked like throw away footy.

[Koolaid]

Seriously, this website is so soft on everyone.

kc:tricks were alright, but they were executed ridiculously bad.

Now for those at home who already are offended, I am not hating on him, I am simply telling him that he needs to do the tricks better.

You probably won't find anywhere that will sponsor you, unless you have a shop with ridiculously low standards. Keep trying and you'll get there. But that all looked like throw away footy.

No your just an ass and I would LOVE to see you do better. :)

Only critesism i have is the song i didnt like it much..

[Miniflipkid]

I would LOVE to see you do better. :)



Did I once say that I could? Please tell me.

I may not throw sketchy varial heels down docks, but I have a basic knowledge of what looks good, and what doesn't.

[crazy_dave]

Pretty good man! Liked the crooks 180 and back 3!

Miniflipkid, try and add a little more positivity in your posts. Your pretty pessimistic.

[kcirtap]

i agree with dave, and not just because its my footy either, youve been saying rude things since day one, you sounded like you were cool and all up until "maybe you could get one a skateshop with really low standards"
thanks for all the nice words and other comments

[Kam1kaze]

Oh, and when you send it in i wouldnt use any music.

[STR8 RIPPIN']

tricks where good but the style and speed where terrible. to be honest i dont think that you will get sponcerd. I only watched the first two clips of the second video but from what form what they were i would definatly so no. (i know it was switch). sorry to be critical

Did I once say that I could? Please tell me.

I may not throw sketchy varial heels down docks, but I have a basic knowledge of what looks good, and what doesn't.
oh and well said.

[bak3r]

maan i like your style.. SICK!!!!!!! :)

[Miniflipkid]

you sounded like you were cool and all up until "maybe you could get one a skateshop with really low standards"


That was a nice comment. I guess I should have said "not one with high standards".

[skatinkrazy]

Nice lets see them iddle and ifnish as well later! :)

[skizzate]

You have had some real nice stuff in the past. You should put that stuff in there, atleast some of it.

[Spanky rox]

that is better, ur old 1 kinda sucked no offense

[kcirtap]

yeah spankydude, i know that my first one sucked, and straight rippin, the second video i posted wasnt me, it was some idiotic little kid, miniflip, i accept your apology (if it was an apology), were cool now right? skizzate, which tricks would you suggest that i put in?

[Kam1kaze]

yeah spankydude, i know that my first one sucked, and straight rippin, the second video i posted wasnt me, it was some idiotic little kid, miniflip, i accept your apology (if it was an apology), were cool now right? skizzate, which tricks would you suggest that i put in?

The bigflip, bs 360, and fs board. My opinion

[skizzate]

^ yeah
That kicker, you had some gnar stuff. I remmeber some table shredding and some other things. What ever you have thats not too sketch works. You have potential I'm sure you could get a sponser if you tried hard enough.

[kcirtap]

alright, thanks bro, ill be filming a lot more when the snow clears up a little bit, im thinking, use my hardflip off of the kicker and maybe my front biggie and maybe the backside flip off the picnic tables

[FireFreek]

I'm sorry but your not going to get sponsored.

try when you have some style and better tricks.

[McJesus]

But that 6 stair kflip in it eventually

[Element 4 life]

the vid was quite good man, some sketch but no 1 is perfect, i liked ur nose grinds they were hot dude, just keep skating, it dousent matter what any one else thinks :)

[Vandalism]

I wasnt feelin it. Maybe some more variety instead of so many crooks, and a little cleaner, but other than that you may have a chance. My 2 cents

[Priority]

my bad man, after i review it i see hat it was that bad. i would just keep the bigflip, 360 and front board. Try and redo the 360 it was kinda sketchy

[kcirtap]

man, theres on way i could redo the back 3, thats about 600 miles from me, haha

and also everyone, keep in mind that this is only the first 30 seconds of it, theres gonna be a lot more tricks in the actual video

[sk8king]

i honestly say that u wont get sponsor yet u cant give a sponsor a video like that now im not being a dick or anything im just saying that u r not doing ur best do more technical stuff like 5 or 6 steps, get alot of air, do stuff over long gaps and crap like that.

[crypticpoet]

Nice tricks, loved the nosegrind on the box. You need to make it all look a little more deliberate, though. Try doing some lines and having your filmer follow you, and develop some gnarly style. Other than that, good work!:)

[kcirtap]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=sS6qZfyrBUg

theres the newly revised one, lines and bigger gaps will be done next time im in town
thanks cryptic, and thanks sk8man

[Ree123]

little more style but pretty good

[Super_Skater]

Seriously, this website is so soft on everyone.

kc:tricks were alright, but they were executed ridiculously bad.

Now for those at home who already are offended, I am not hating on him, I am simply telling him that he needs to do the tricks better.

You probably won't find anywhere that will sponsor you, unless you have a shop with ridiculously low standards. Keep trying and you'll get there. But that all looked like throw away footy.

Dude I totally agree with you this site is way to soft, some people are idiots and dicks ect. I mean everywhere you go people are going to be dicks you're jkust going to have to deal with it. This is not aimed at anyone in any way, I'm just saying. And to kc the video was alright but you need to do some bigger stuff like sets and rails.

[crypticpoet]

The new video was a nice improvement. You definately have the tricks, but you need to develop more style. Try to look more comfortable on the board, and make your gaps bigger. But there's good location variation. Good work, buddy.

[AlmostJeff]

You've shown a lot of improvement. Just keep skating and eventually you'll have more style, and you're tricks will seem a lot more flawless.

[kcirtap]

thanks guys, maybe i'll just try the trick a couple of times on a gap and not just once, thansk again

[swayze]

good luck on everything man!

[kcirtap]

http://media.putfile.com/Sponsor-video-beginning
heres the newest edition of the video, its getting colder so i dont know if i'll be able to film a bunch more, the kickflip nosemanny will be redid

[McJesus]

Makin love to the 6 flip and the table top nose manny

[kcirtap]

thanks dude, i would'a gotten a kickflip manny on the table, but i didnt think to set that up till i was about to leave

[Enjoi-Es14]

well.... you get sponsered?

[Super_Skater]

It was ok, few skatchy things, and you need some bigger stuff. Also I didn't like that dance at the beggining, thought it was kinda stupid.

[sk8king]

dude u r basicly sponsor
that was ****ing sweet!!! i love it!! that was awsome!!!! way better than the first one

Good job!!

[kcirtap]

enjoy_es dude, i still wanna get about a minute more of footy, the title sasy beginning correct? thanks for all the words guys, but unfortunately it just snowed so no more footy till spring :(

[jcsportsfan84]

i actually liked the tricks, just they were a little sketchy, so if u could get them cleaner i say its real good man..also i heard that u shouldnt use music in sponsor vids, just a thought, but ya i cant wait to see the finished version

[jcsportsfan84]

o wait, i didnt c the 2nd vid when i made the last comment...the 2nd one is much better, i like the tricks a lot more...switch flip the gap n switch crook were sick

[jack_morris]

The 360 was rad, you just need to work on speed i think.

[newb360]

pretty sweet

[sk8king]

i couldnt see it for some reason u should put in utube its better
i hate quicktime player it never works for some reason

[kcirtap]

putfile beats the shit outta youtube, you might hafta wait a while, or just download quicktime player off of the apple site
thanks for the words guys!

[JJBDude]

The tricks you do are good, get them off some bigger ledges and then you have a chance. Afraid I really dislike your style though.

[punk sk8er boi]

Clean it up, i liked ur bs kickflip to 50-50

[Slyde]

terrible style, everything was sketchy, bad filming, and bad edit.


I agree, and on top of that, you look really gay.

[Pirate skate]

terrible style, everything was sketchy, bad filming, and bad edit
you forgot to mention the song

[Pirate skate]

sorry bud, no sponsor in the world would sponsor a kid who puts park footage in, uses a song, has sloppy style, accepts sloppy landings, it was all bad, but keep at it.

[Slyde]

sorry bud, no sponsor in the world would sponsor a kid who puts park footage in, uses a song, has sloppy style, accepts sloppy landings, it was all bad, but keep at it.

Pretty much nailed it.

[Ramp]