new promo

[swayze]

me and lawrence (almost skater) are making a new video. this is our first time so dont be too harsh. the one in the black hoody is me. the one in the red is lawrence. towards the end im in yellow and hes in green.

http://www.ramprage.com/forums/media/showphoto.php?photo=4238&cat=500&ppuser=9719

comments?

[kevman]

A little bit sketchy but it's pretty good. Try ollieing off of stairs In your next one.

[swayze]

A little bit sketchy but it's pretty good. Try ollieing off of stairs In your next one.we might get the 7 but its at a park and we couldnt go today.

[skizzate]

Not bad. Looks like you guys are having fun. Get some more spots though. The incline(cant really call it a bank), try to come back down fakie. When you turn it just doesn't look as good as it can. Or learn fs/bs flips on it.

[skatinkrazy]

Nice! Looks ike we both just made our first skate videos (or promo). Yours was better then mine. But I do have higher pop suhv its by far. But you KILL me in flips. nice!

[loganownzj00]

^^ You're cool.

Anyways, I love how you make the video sound so dramatic and interestingly creative.

[Dookie416]

those were some nice feet let me tell you

[China Skate]

Take all those words out like-
"Like none other"
and you'll be set.

[SteenBlakai]

skatinkrazy shut the hell up.
I couldnt stand when u said u were better than ur frend but now ur comparing urself to a stranger that is obviously better than u but u dont see him or anyone else comparing themsleves to others.

It looks like it has good editing somehat i didnt like the transitions ro filming u used but u arranged the clips good and synchronized it with the music good.

[swayze]

skatinkrazy shut the hell up.
I couldnt stand when u said u were better than ur frend but now ur comparing urself to a stranger that is obviously better than u but u dont see him or anyone else comparing themsleves to others.

It looks like it has good editing somehat i didnt like the transitions ro filming u used but u arranged the clips good and synchronized it with the music good.
thanks man. and skatinkrazy hasnt even seen me do a shuvit in nollie so wtf. your right.

[swayze]

those were some nice feet let me tell you
dude, nothing is good enough for you. can you ever say "good job" or something positive for once?

[Sk854]

It's kinda nice, I like your kickflips.

[sizlesteve]

Good video. Im just saying but if you didn't land any of the flip tricks off of the ledges.....dont cut them off in the middle to make it seem like you can.(not trying to be harsh or mean, just dosent look good.

[skatinkrazy]

Dude! I complimented yours and said you were way betetr then me! All I said was my pop suhv it was higher cuz I loked at yours. I said you were way better and now your telling me to shut up for syaing I'm bettert hen you? WTF? Forget I said it then.

[loganownzj00]

NOOB BATTLE!!!

Had to say that.

[swayze]

Dude! I complimented yours and said you were way betetr then me! All I said was my pop suhv it was higher cuz I loked at yours. I said you were way better and now your telling me to shut up for syaing I'm bettert hen you? WTF? Forget I said it then.
i never pop shuvited. go film some more ollies going into the grass

[swayze]

Good video. Im just saying but if you didn't land any of the flip tricks off of the ledges.....dont cut them off in the middle to make it seem like you can.(not trying to be harsh or mean, just dosent look good.
actually, one was landed but i cut it a little early.

[skatinkrazy]

But you did pop shuv it in beginner game of skate.....and I am remaking my video right now much better, doing nose grabs onto plywood and sutff now.

[swayze]

But you did pop shuv it in beginner game of skate.....and I am remaking my video right now much better, doing nose grabs onto plywood and sutff now.
wow, your so cool. and in the beginner game of skate, was i suppose to do my highest pop shuvit? how was i suppose to know?

[Kam1kaze]

Nice! Looks ike we both just made our first skate videos (or promo). Yours was better then mine. But I do have higher pop suhv its by far. But you KILL me in flips. nice!

1)Youre pop shovs arent higher than 1 foot, so why are you bragging?
2)Nobody gives a damn.

Like someone said dont cut the clips halfway, and take out the letters in the middle. Okay for a first vid though.

[Miniflipkid]

dude, nothing is good enough for you. can you ever say "good job" or something positive for once?

You have to do something worth a positive comment in order to get one.

Flatground kickflips,feet shots, and poorly cut clips aren't included in that category.

This is called criticism by the way. We're telling you what you did wrong so you can go back, try again, and fix it. We aren't being mean, we're trying to help you get better. We're helping you.

[loganownzj00]

^^ I actually agree with Miniflip (YEAH!) on that one. There's basically nothing to praise, cause it's just a beginner video. So all we can do is criticize and get you better.

- Actually start popping higher and catching your kickflips
- Don't cut clips half way
- Take out the words
- Filming your feet is not that good looking.

[Dookie416]

dude, nothing is good enough for you. can you ever say "good job" or something positive for once?

dude, i can't help the fact that a 3 year old could film better than you.

[loganownzj00]

Because you didn't make a ****ing topic and you had to PM me about this shit.

http://media.putfile.com/Kickflips-Help

I just spent 20 minutes filming and editing that. Cheers.

Yeah its sketchy. but i filmed both consequetively first try.

[China Skate]

This is called criticism by the way.
There's a difference between constructive criticism and inefficacious criticism.

Stop it with all the aruging you guys are making a thread look a bunch of 7 year olds fighting over whos better at playing fake swordfights.

[McJesus]

LOL wtf did i just watch?>

[loganownzj00]

Oh and excuse me about my rudeness in the post where I gave you my kickflip help. I was pissed off about something.

Anyways, it took like 15 minutes to find out how to cut and slow-mo the clips. (In case you're wondering how it took 20 minutes to edit that).

[Koolaid]

im better at play sword fights then all of you!!

[Ramp]