Local Skateshop Promo

[how_do_you_feel]

I filmed this promo of my friend who skates for me and my friend's skate team, Odd. We start work on our first video, "How Do You Feel?" this summer.


http://www.eengoedidee.nl/videoz/skateboarding/brotherspromo.wmv


Any Comments, or Criticism is Appreciated

[Ephieboy14]

not bad

[Freaky Styley]

like the snap to graphic at the start.
Sound was like listening to nails on a chalk board.
The lens looked filthy.
tricks were not that solid, but that will come.
Its probably not a good idea to run a simple trick next to a sweet set and not touch the set or stairs.
Music would be a good thing also.

hope this helps.

[how_do_you_feel]

Thanx for the input, but about that set, its impossible, its a 12 and theres about 3 feet of room, and you cant go diagonal to it...

[bombdiggity]

wow thats terrible. thats for askateshop?
dude im a filmer and im better then those kids
the kid said yea! after he ollied a little 6 inch gap dude. does your town have like no good skaters? that tre flip wasnt even landed. im sorry but i laugh practically the whole time. and when that kid did ollie that gap you tilted the camera too much up. so you didnt see the "gap"
sorry no offence your not too good at filming that will come. and those kids blow the big one.

[bombdiggity]

o and the last second angle of the ollie into the bank next to the stairs had nice compsoition.

[BakerStencil]

Was alright, Best trick was the Nollie Flip.

[how_do_you_feel]

dude, not to sound cocky, but im not bad at filming, and considering i threw this thing together in about 2 hours, from filming to final editing, i think i did pretty good.

[Skate or Try]

no you didn't. A skate shop team. That was terrible. My mates can throw all those tricks in one in one go. Not being harsh but really.........


style?

[how_do_you_feel]

alright, fair enough...the skating was mediocre, but enough about that... What exactly is wrong with my filming/editing, I mean, I study the filming in the videos, I go out just to practice... Sure I got a piece of crap Hi-8, thats why im gettin a dv.

Now instead of talking about the skating, tell me what was wrong with my filming? Any input is helpful...

[willis879]

seriously. i don't think you guys ride for a shop but. i might be wrong, dunno. your friend there has some horrable style. bend those knees it will do em better
filming was good. try and find some better spots

[bombdiggity]

your pretty smooth if you 'study' videos youll notice you dont just fade 3 crappy tricks in out in out
you tilted up to much on that gap that he yells yeah! after

[Blind Sheppard]

you can't skate for a shop, the guy ollied across a tiny gap and fell off . the nollie flip was good but why was there so much ollieing into little slopes instead of ollieing stairs.

[how_do_you_feel]

No, No No, He doesnt skate for a shop, it was just to show the guy who works there my filming. But thanx for the input

[Skate or Try]

oh i see, well in that case. The filming was pretty good just spend a good few minutes first looking for the angle

[Freaky Styley]

I could care less who skates for what, You had sum good and bad things in there that I mentioned.

The poeple who threw in the rest of that crap about what the believe or not is irrelvent...so just keep working and im sure the next will be much better.


takecare.

[GirlSkateboards]

its nice. my friends and I are putting together a tape also.

[Griptape Flip]

IT was so so

[blind_rippa]

pretty good, i liked it

[Gaurdian14]

it was so-so but i dont think you should put in the little crappy ollie downt eh ramp once, let alone twice (or was it 3?)

[KickTheFlip]

i didnt like it too much. the person skating has bad style but things will look up for ye. keep filming man. keep on keepin on

[aceall]

yeah, jus chillin lets calm down a little bit....it was good, could land some tricks alittle cleaner, and the name part in the front is long, make it about 3 secounds

[Freaky Styley]

Wow that was helpful jus chillin...maybe this warning is what you wanted to see instead!

[aceall]

haha, i think he likes it, and you should do like a huge trick at the end.......and fire works, haha

[ploke]

ya im the person who sk8s in that vid, and i know it sucked we just went to this little 100 by 100 foot church with nothing but those homo little banks, and the sets that were there were impossible. we were there for about 45 minutes, it was about 30 degrees, my bored sucked royally, and like i said it was cold. my style was bad then but you should see some of dans more recent filming and my sk8ing and style are definatly better now, so i appricate the constructive critisism but when you have to diss me all hardcore like that then its starting to get stupid. thats what i think so....

[Ramp]